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Open Poetry #1

Dream's Passion

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 1999-07-31 02:17 PM

Your eyes haunt me through twilight's mist,
Staring seductively into my soul.
Beautiful lashes blink oh so slowly,
Causing sweat to break on my forehead.
My dreaming body twists and rolls,
Throwing sheets and pillows to the floor,
As tangible thoughts pierce into my brain.
I live this dream of you in perfect reality,
Knowing your touch, your kiss.
My arms embrace you, longing to hold you forever,
Squeezing tight the air around me.
My lips seek yours, fervently racing
Up your neck, and finally,
Finally,
I wake,
Soaked in my dream's passion.

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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

1 posted 1999-07-31 02:45 PM

Oh and what longing you feel when you wake up!!! Alas for all those who can only have the one they want in their dreams. Very vivid poem, well done.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-31 08:50 PM

wow....gets out the hose to cool you down. Lovely poem Masked

Cinderella
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 152
Arizona

3 posted 1999-07-31 09:02 PM

I think it is time for a cold shower!

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

4 posted 1999-07-31 09:03 PM

mmmmmmmm..marvelous imagery.....mmmmm..masterfully done. mmmm..maybe I should go now. mmmm..my goodness.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2005-06-19 01:14 AM

Hey now that was an east coast kind of dream for sure. How are you? Missing your work in here.

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

6 posted 2007-05-28 04:11 PM

Wonderfully vivid, I went there. Look forward to reading more of your work.

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