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Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

0 posted 1999-07-28 12:24 PM

The darkness of confusion has covered up the
Eye
That sees the truth when the heart may
Lie
Searching desperately for the
Truth
When in all respect I am not a
Sleuth
How can a topic such as
Love
Take away the breath of a carrier
Dove
A boundary between love and
Hate
All predetermined by our sweet Lord's
Fate
We face many doors but which one is
Right
There is no signal, no guiding
Light
Eyes of caring, eyes of hurt all at one
Time
Place me alone
So tell me what did I do
Wrong
That has kept me lonely far too
Long
With no companion there by my
Side
Who'll stand beside me through life's long
Ride
Who won't hurt me like others
Before
Speak from the heart he'll know the
Score
Minds today have only one
Thought
Sleep in the sheets without getting
Caught
So when does the love truly
Begin
How can we stop losing and finally
Win
If you know please tell me I'm desperate you
See
The darkness of confusion has swept over
Me

Always looking for the perfect man, but my heart just hasn't found him!

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

1 posted 1999-07-28 05:02 PM

In time Sweet T, a "perfect" will appear and your heart will feel clear. Stop looking and he will be there.
blueloon

P/S: I really liked this poem...To the top it goes.

leelew
Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

2 posted 1999-07-28 05:34 PM

Well done!! I loved it!

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

3 posted 1999-07-29 12:28 PM

Thank you all for you inspiring words.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-07-29 05:11 PM

Keep faith, Sweet T! He's out there!! BTW, a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

5 posted 1999-07-29 06:11 PM

Alwye.....
Thank you, I know he's out there, the trouble is finding him!

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