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Fofinha
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 8
Clifton, CO, USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 01:15 AM


I wrote this one years ago, at a bad time in my life....

So dark and gloom
no windows in the wall
all alone in this room.

My mind races on and on
but there's nothing there
all my dreams are gone.

The silence so loud
I long to hear
just a single sound.




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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
1 posted 1999-07-28 03:13 AM


wow, your words described how i feel a lot of the time. i'm glad your through your hard time. any advice for me to get through mine? no medicine or phsycologist seems to be working.
Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-07-28 03:17 AM


yes.. this is a familiar feeling to me as well.. but.. with God and a few friends.. I am getting thru

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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 322
within a whisper...
3 posted 1999-07-28 08:35 AM


where i used to live, i had 2 best friends. i could tell them anything. they were always there for me, and anything i said to them remained confidential. however, a few months ago, i moved thousands of miles away from them. one of them is on a long trip, and there is no mailing address i can contact her at. the other is extremely hard to get a hold of because he has such a tight schedule. so, right now, i have no friends i can really talk to.
Fofinha
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 8
Clifton, CO, USA
4 posted 1999-07-28 11:12 AM


I got divorced... =) It still took me a year, but I decided it was up to me to be happy or sad. People let ya down all the time. I still feel this way once in awhile, but not to often. You can always talk to me.. =)
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