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In memory of my little one...
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In memory of my little one... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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A child so innocent & tender - so pure So capable of growing - so capable of life... Of laughter and smiles...of sorrow & tears... Of loving and caring and dreaming and hoping... This child's world so abruptly came to a standstill This tiny soul was not yet meant to evolve. This child I love...this child I lost.... A young man so warm and tender - yet strong So capable of reaching any star he desires... He knows of laughter & too many tears... He's learning to love & dreams everyday... Of what tomorrow may bring him - sunshine or rain Chin held high for he has evolved & grows daily. This young man I love...I will not lose twice. My greatest loss and yet my biggest gain - both came about on this 28th day of August... ***** In Memory of Laisha Denea... ......my little one. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
great job, my mom has had 6 miscarries and it has caused a lot of pain for her. thanks. i think i'll share this with her. |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
This touched a core fatale A mothers love is core of our soul I had much trouble getting both my son's in to this world... my last son was a twin I lost his sister, my only daughter in my fith month Thank God he was a fighter his first three years were rough ones!! Being a parent of a child with special needs is a gift in many ways, it opens our eyes wider then ever before, and lightens are hearts in a way only thoes of us that have been touched can discribe [This message has been edited by tori (edited 07-28-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you ladies for sharing your deeply sincere feelings & comments on this issue...it's certainly not the easiest to overcome when it happens...just knowing that you're not alone in a tragic loss makes it a little easier when asking "Why..." ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
My dear, i just have to comment. You really have a lovely way with words, and it's often hard to find words that truly express the depth of loss - sometimes there's simply no words! I wrote a poem about the frustration of words - it's one of 3 in what I've titled Series 1; I just don't have it with me today, but look out for it, I'll put it on soon. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you Severn - you know how I value your thoughts & input....they truly mean alot... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hi, it's me again! Just wanted to let you know I got your fantastic message, thankyou so much. Are you having a good day (night?) in your part of the world?!!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well, sorry to disappoint(hehehe) but I'm female thru and thru and wrote Accidental Passing for a guy from my past. I'm actually in a relationship right now with the greatest guy in the world, but he doesn't write! (I can forgive that though...just!) Severn is a name of a character in the novel I'm writing - does it sound masculine? |
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