Open Poetry #1 |
I wish I knew |
owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
Yet another poem of me desperately wanting to know just what my dear Katrina is thinking. Can she see how much I love her Or do I speak those words in vain Can she tell I would have no other And does she know she’s not the same As other girls before her The ones that couldn’t compare I need her as a lover I offer her my life to share I wish I could see into her mind And see what her thoughts consist of But I may be scared of what I find Her feelings may not be true love I write her letters and poems So that she will know Just how much I care I’m not sure if I get through When I say “I love you” I hope she realizes this kind of love is so rare |
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Augchic711 Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 80O'Fallon, IL, USA |
owen-- yet again you move me with your words thank you for sharing it with me again hope to hear from you again *******augchic711****** |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
I wonder if she knows how lucky she is? Such depth of emotion expressed here, great poem. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
if every man wrote such poetry...divorce would soon be history ------------------ i never call a poem "nice" or such, for that would not be saying much |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
Amen sister ! You write beautifully Owen... Keep up the good work |
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