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Open Poetry #1

Graveyard Visit

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-10 04:23 AM

Graveyard Visit

I entered the graveyard
As the wind howled by
I noticed the trees
And stared at the sky
I saw a young girl
On her knees she did weep
Was it for her lover
Who had entered eternal sleep?
I walked a step closer
And reached to touch her shoulder
And looked into the eyes
Of a woman much older
Then stared at the emptiness
Of where she had been
And looked at the tombstone
Which stated who was within
A young girl had died
Was she a ghost who sat here?
I rushed out of the graveyard
Trembling with fear.

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-10 04:59 AM

Great darkness, give us more!

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvil©

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-07-12 12:25 PM

chilling indeed...brava

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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

3 posted 1999-07-12 01:22 PM

Oooooo, a little spoooooky. I like it! Great work, azblond!

[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 07-12-99).]

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