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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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"P ositive" is a way of thinking we should all posess... O pen hearts & open minds give way to happiness... S ongs escape of life & peace from many lips today... I nstead of songs of broken dreams that crumble - fade away. T ell me - do you often think that everything is grand? I s there hunger, fear or doubt in your sultry land? V isions of tomorrow bright should be within your mind... E very star you wish upon...you'll someday surely find! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
you have my vote...i believe in Beck's cognitive approach  ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...07-20-69...devotion... Master...apart...plain...chat? |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
I like it.I liked the way it is laid out. it flows,and if everyone thought like that life would be alot nicer.keep going! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I think this flows very nicely! And I agree...we all need to think positively! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
It's a great anagram(?) - well laid out, and with smooth flow from line to line. I enjoyed it, especially since I try to have a PMA. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I enjoyed reading this POSITIVELY! |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Wouldn't it be wondeful if everyone had a positive attitude?Happy writing. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I LOVE IT!!!!! Very nice format and it works so well for you. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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denboro Junior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 12 |
Hi, I have read some of your poems and think they are wonderful, and if you are interested, I would love to read some of your erotic stuff? I too agree that we all have that side to us, and some are better at letting it out. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I enjoyed this Positive is the way to go! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks everyone for your comments on this one - I almost didn't post it because it's not one of my favorites, however it's gotten the most response! Denboro, I would love to share some of my Erotic poetry, but I've yet to figure out who I have to be to get in there ( the Adult Forum) I think that place is "CLASSIFIED"....LOL ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Magic Bunny Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 18 |
This poem was positively positive! ------------------ The Magical Rainbow Bunny |
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denboro Junior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 12 |
by all means, email me some . Take care.........keep up the great work.Dennis |
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