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A man's eyes... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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..........Look deep into the eyes of a man......... ...........................See his soul................................. ...................Storms hidden within......................... ................................Raging...................................... ..............Heal him - make him whole.................. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
your words are simply wonderful! They capture my mind.so great as the whom writes such sweet verses. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Sorry guys, I'd like to send this tiny little piece back through....it's not much, but hey ..? ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good no matter the size! to center your poetry (if that's what you were going for - if not, skip this) before your first word type < then the word CENTER then > at the end of the poem do the opposite < then / CENTER then >  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you ms deVine, I've been wondering how to do that... now if you'll only tell me how to ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-15-99).] [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-15-99).] |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Short & sweet....but packs a punch! I wonder, do men feel the same intensity when gazing into their lover's eyes? I'm truly curious about this. [This message has been edited by Terri (edited 08-15-99).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This reminded me of the magic when that connection between eyes is made and all those tiny thoughts transmit themselves without a single word being spoken... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Look into your lovers eyes.... See each and every desire, Every dream.... Every wanton fantasy.... The challenge lies not in fulfilling these, But rather in recognizing them... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Fabulous addition, Mark....I loved it...how very powerful your few words....and very true. Thank you....***blowing kisses ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Short and to the point.Enjoyed the poem. |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
GREAT! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is wonderful.... ...It'd work for women too..  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sensual and so true |
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