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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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I hear voices...in the night... none of them...belong to you... Tell my heart...it isn't right... to crumble softly...break in two. Sing to me...a song so true... of lovely things...of me & you... Wipe away...my tears that fall... help me stand...so brave & tall. Stars that shine...so far away... help me make...it thru the day... Just like your kiss...upon my soul... magically... you make me whole. Without you here...I'm incomplete... A ship asail...without a fleet... A raging storm...without a sea... A soul in love...so mode it be. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I send this back from page 40-something only because it reminds me of someone in this forum...someone I've grown very fond of...his softer side, anyway. (grin) Thank you. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah, come on guys! I'll PAY someone to comment on this one!?? Any takes? At least tell me that it's a sorry piece of attempt !  I used to really like this one - although I know it's not one of my best.------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You poor desperate thing! You can pay my student loan if you like!!! More Emily Dickinson comparisions must be stated here - I like! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Femme, You convey your feelings to the reader well here which to me is the true test of any poem. I truly share your sentiment. Michael |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
PFF - You don't have to pay me - I'll tell you I like it anyway - I LIKE IT!!! ( - Lobby for a raise for me, maybe?)...  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Searching in the archives, I found this gem, from Gen..Had to tell you, I liked it to, very much. catalinamoon |
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