Open Poetry #1 |
Letting Go |
Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
The course breezes Of winter cross my face I’m sent back to the last of our summers The warmth, the friendship, and the love The pain is no longer there and you are no longer here As I lean in to kiss you the cold hits again Everything so sharp and swift Everything such a reminder As the brown and gold casket is being lowered in front of me now Touch me forever, but touch me no longer I promise this time I will let you go Forgive me in my time of depression.. I have just lost a friend.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ladycat-I am so sorry to hear about your friend. Email me if you feel like talking. And I do like your poem! |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Thank you Elizabeth and I think that I will be emailing you real soon.. It is good to know that you have friends in the netpoets.. Love, Lady ------------------ Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This poem really moved me, and I thought it would be nice to see it again...I'm a firm believer in making the most of every day, because we don't know when our number is up....live life to the fullest, and love every soul around you, for you may not see them tomorrow ! Make sure they know just how much they mean to you......before they're gone. Cherish everything & everyone! ****blowing kisses Ladycat, I know you will rise up from this a stronger, and more beautiful individual....thank you for sharing such a personal moment.... ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
many people tell me that I'm a great comforter. your poem has touched me deeply. my email is available if you need to talk. |
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