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LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 1999-07-26 01:27 PM


I know I posted my poem twice,
Patience has never been my suit.
I hate waiting for the Internet, but
I know interrupting it is rude.

So if you read either poem,
And from that a comment stems,
A CC to the other post
Is not needed to make me grin.

Just pretend its deja vu,
And its happening all over again.
Or if it really gets to you,
While stamping your foot, say "Men!"

© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669
Michigan, US
1 posted 1999-07-26 02:47 PM


This message makes no sense to me:
No evidence that I can see
Of double postings any where,
of déjà vu's or double dare.

Perhaps you've had too much to drink?
A double view's not rare, I think,
When elbow bends more than it must
(And poets oft' forget to trust).

Of double posts, we don't abide,
So déjà vu's we always hide!
No double sight allowed, you see,
So Zap, delete - just one for thee!


LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 1999-07-26 05:15 PM


Ron!

Great comeback - I've enjoyed your postings. It is a pleasure posting here. Thanks for cleaning up my double post. Kinda embarrassin', yanno?

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
3 posted 1999-07-26 11:24 PM


a two-for-one chuckle...thanks LngJhn and Ron

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master
...apart...plain...chat?



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