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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 Elvira, I'm putting this one back at the top. You're the one who brings up all the other ones and no one replied to this. I liked the poem since I know how hard it is to want someone who doesn't want you back. You did a good job! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Well, I for one is glad that Elizabeth brought this one back up!! I really like this and understand the feeling well. Keep up the great work, Elvira! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
What a beautiful poem. I am so glad it was brought back to the top for I have been blessed to have read it. ------------------ I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I wish I hadn't missed this one, this is within my interest range (medieval and fantasy). I really like your usage of countenance. A profound meaning. |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Ah,unrequited love, how painful a topic. And trust me, I know. There is a small catcus in Delaware that just WON'T return my calls. Nice poem Elvira, very beautiful  ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I like this... you paint a very real picture of love just out of reach. Nice work. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Good work Elvira.Happy writing. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
elvira Yanno, at first I thought it was just a story about a servant and some kind of nobility. Then, after some of the women got ahold of it, I realized it was much more than that. Talk about still waters! (well, talk about stagnant waters, too - but please try not to associate hair color with my slowness - lol). |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
elvira Thank you for the very nice welcome. Over the years I've become accustomed to breaking into" a new board or chat room or whatever. I know it takes time and a lot of patience. So I'll just save some of my favorite poems (heh heh heh) until people get to know me. I wasted my poem, The Wind, because I forgot the fundamental rule about being "the new guy:" Wait until people see you are funloving and upbeat. Then hit 'em with something a little deeper. BTW - I've enjoyed your work, and your comments in my own 'lurking' way *g* |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ah, Lady E He is blind He cannot see The hidden jewel The masterful fool More's the pity |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
There is one thing for sure we all pray that our "Imortal beloved" is looking for us too! As always elvira, I always enjoy reading your words. Your talents is endless! blueloon |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
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