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Open Poetry #1

Twilight

TheGreenPolarBear
Junior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 38
Kansas

0 posted 1999-07-25 12:48 PM

Dying shadows fade from view as
a lonely, glowing orb falls beneath
the distant horizon.
A whisper passes along
the band of weary travelers
as a dull light begins to pierce
through the trees in the east.
A simple decision is made,
and an unfinished mission is left
to wait for the return of darkness.
Then the mythical voyagers
melt into a growing fog,
leaving behind another mystery
in the ever-present gloom of twilight.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-07-25 01:39 PM

Very nice Green Polar Bear. I Would like to have been there.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 1999-07-25 02:23 PM

Nice going, ryan. Loved it

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-07-25 09:38 PM

mysterious..it gave me an eerie feeling. Excellent!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

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