Respect for the Ladies (another sonnet)-at a challenge from one voice

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Respect for the Ladies (another sonnet)-at a challenge from one voice

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-24 03:42 AM

I've found something of serious concern.
I profound lack of respect for women.
At a woman's touch, every man will burn.
When sated, he casts her aside again.

Soothing the soul, they make me feel at peace.
They're compassion extends to me I've found.
Wrapped in their arms I find a sweet release.
With their care my inner Beast has been bound.

I show my respect by watching my speech.
I listen with my heart to their own fears.
I honor those who are out of my reach.
I try to brush aside all of their tears.

Respect for the Ladies is quite lacking.
Show it to them or I'll send you packing.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Linda
Junior Member

since 1999-07-19

Posts 11
Puyallup Wa

1 posted 1999-07-24 04:35 AM

Chilvary ~~> is not dead!! LOL.. Good poem

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Lindeee

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-07-24 05:10 AM

Nope, Linda is right...you're a true knight in shining armour! White horse and all! My rescuer...

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-07-24 05:14 AM

You know who rides a pale horse don't you? You know what follows him?

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

4 posted 1999-07-24 08:28 AM

Wow, this is outstanding.

Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

5 posted 1999-07-24 11:44 AM

Very well said!Need Help?I'll be at your side.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-07-24 03:02 PM

Thanks, but not today.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-07-24 10:02 PM

Wonderful Dream...simply wonderful.

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

8 posted 1999-07-25 01:29 AM

Glad you like it, I doubt I'll post anymore, though.

Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

9 posted 1999-07-26 04:01 AM

It's so nice to know that there are some men out there that view women as more than an object.
You have restored my faith in men.lol

Good job.

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