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Open Poetry #1

My One Desire

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-23 03:58 AM

Oh, I could but hope
the innocent musings
of my heart,
when heard
by the ears of my Lady,
would induce such a wave
of gentle regard,
that she would swoon.
Perhaps 'tis just
the honeyed words
which trip
from this silver tongue
of mine.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

1 posted 1999-07-23 04:22 AM

Very good

keep up the good work

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Thy own Darkness shall conquer the Light

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

2 posted 1999-07-23 05:48 AM

Thank you, my love! I couldn't ask to be loved more!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

3 posted 1999-07-23 09:05 AM

Very nice...I like it!

heaven_0401
Junior Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 19
Australia

4 posted 1999-07-23 04:31 PM

Dear Dreamevil
how good are you? another magnificent poem, loved it. When you've got time get back to me

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-07-23 08:58 PM

Thanks much, just ramblings of an early morning.

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

6 posted 1999-07-23 11:27 PM

*sigh*
ah jest luv sliver tongues...that is silver tongues
ahh whatever
this was great!
Izzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

thursdayschild
Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 169
Houston, Tx.

7 posted 1999-12-14 01:02 AM

'Tis sweet! You could make a Sequoia swoon!

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