Open Poetry #1 |
Evil Cowards |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Evil Cowards They came to me in a midnight dream threatening to cross my eyes for life. Fooling them I played blind as they rummaged through my mind. I live my life under God's caring hands, so while I sleep the evil cowards terrorize me. They think that they can frighten me, scare me from my skin, make me follow them doing evil crimes. I'd rather take a donkey ride to prove I'm not their kind. The fear of falling off a cliff would delight me so much more, then bowing to the devils feet, and asking him for more. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Is the name on this one bad? Is that why I have gotten no replys, or did I step on satan's toes to hard? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beats me, Dreamer. This is the first I've seen of it and I think it's terrific. The title fits well and the meaning is clear and the thought provoking. For what it's worth, ya got me! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thanks Sir Balladeer, coming from you I feel secure. This made it to page 4 though and that surprised me. Guess the timing was bad. I was originally gonna call it Midnight Dream, but thought I'd make it interesting, at least I thought. Anyways Thank-You very much. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Works for me. Sorry I missed it the last time around. Glad you liked Centipede. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-you Andrew Scott, and yes Centipede was interesting. I don't like them cause they are so big and creepy looking and always seem to like crawling around places where I am. Recently I had to kill one crawling up my wall, I wanted to die. One actually crawled across the computer desk late one night as I was sitting there. I was almost ready for the looney bin at that point. |
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