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owen Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19Toledo, WA USA |
Your body is such a splendor I've felt every inch and explored you with great care What else can you offer me Besides that ass, that breast, and that sex No part of you is left sacred and that disgusts me It was me that destroyed your pathetic righteousness Stained your sheets and betrayed your covet Can’t you say anything that might interest me That might make me respect what I’ve taken away Have I told you that your beautiful Have I told that’s all you are Give me a kiss Let me taste that sour soul once more |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
Speaker in this one sounds guilt-ridden to me. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
anything that might intrest me? Sounds like maybe someone else was invaded, and waiting for a reply that might intrest them. Look to others not just self! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Pathetic righteousness? Not sure I like that phrase. Sour soul? Hm... This may be better received on the Adult Forum. |
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