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owen
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 19
Toledo, WA USA

0 posted 1999-06-17 01:41 AM


I'll remember her as perfect

Love beyond my comprehension of emotion

Never a kiss on the lips, or an attempt at making love

Just happiness and a smile for both of us

We'd run forever down the beach

Crash on the sand

I'd touch her while she slept

Softly brush my hand across her cheek

Softly touch her lips with my fingers

To kiss them, I knew, would brake our spell

Destroy the bliss that we knew was so delicate

Look into her eyes

We made love that way

True love

© Copyright 1999 owen - All Rights Reserved
Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-18 02:03 AM


Owen --
I would like to e-mail you a poem I wrote for my boyfriend i don't feel comfortable posting it because it is specifically for him and you and I have this true bliss in common let me know if you would enjoy it thank you for sharing this poem it shows me that I am not the only one who feels like this

*******augchic711*******

owen
Junior Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 19
Toledo, WA USA
2 posted 1999-06-18 02:22 AM


augchic711, I would love to read your poem. Thank you so very much for asking me to read one that you consider private. I would be honored.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-23 03:28 AM


sweet
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