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Never say goodbye
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Never say goodbye |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
Never say goodbye you're not out of my life, Never shed a tear when you're struggling with strife, I am by your side, never doubt nor deny me, I am in your heart and it's there where you'll find me, I am that quiet voice you hear in your head, I am the one that is laughing at the words that you said, Never miss me when you think of the times that we shared, Never doubt for a second that I never cared, I was the one who was hurting when your pain was so strong, I was the one who felt guilty when something went wrong, I was the one that was looking when you would no longer look, I was the ears that listened for as long as it took, Never think you're alone when you're facing your fears, Never think you're alone when your're lost in your tears, I am the one who is smiling in the corner of your eye, I am the one who won't question or even ask why, I am the voice that keeps talking when you hurt to much to speak, I am the one whoe keeps on searching when you can no longer seek, Never think seperation will destroy or divide, Never think for a moment our friendship has died, I am your sister, your shadow, your reflection, your soul, A place in your heart is the home that I stole, Never say goodbye , we are never apart, Never say goodbye while you still have a heart. [This message has been edited by Rita (edited 07-21-99).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I have no siblings, but my wife has nine. I'm sure she would love this even more than I. My compliments for a very good piece. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this is excellent, and beautiful. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well done indeed, actually made me feel a bit guilty as i haven't called/written my sister in a while ------------------ If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well done, you should be comended on this piece, thank you for sharing. It was very well formed in good rythym and rhyme and everything flowed together as smooth as honey. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I could insert "daughter" for "sister" and it's my relationship with my Mother. I needed to read this tonight .. Rita, if you are around still -- Thank you. A |
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