Open Poetry #1 |
Lifeless form |
Starfish Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 34New Zealand |
I tried to wite a poem that might, break out of its shell a while Dazzle you with verbal handstands and slight of hand tricks But today it resembles its oringinator - unable to touch you in its lifeless form |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
Starfish... very nice... I'm not sure what it means for you but it ressembles a whole lot how feel about my boyfriend... My poems just don't touch him like I would want them to...I mean, he's a really deep person...an artist eaven, just not a man of many words. My life revolves around words (probably too much) and it makes me real sad that i am unable to touch him. Would you mind if I sent it to him? Maybe then he would get it... mia |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow.....I really liked this one. Just enough said to make the reader think and not too little said to keep them wondering of your intentions. Good work!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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