Open Poetry #1 |
Final Verse |
DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Perhaps this is the last verse I will ever write, I'm tired of being derided, called weak and uninspired. My verse is considered jaded, boring, and trite. I think I am right in returning to the burning pleasures of the Night, therein lies the delight that drew me with my yearning. Hate keeps me alive, safe and warm, Within the arms of vengeance that never relents or parts the tapestry of me. I open my eyes to what blinded me before, I found to my sorrow That all the reasons That made me flee, Where there, staring back at me. Against this fate I will not wail and curse, Just put to paper this final verse. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o no you dont i drag you by the ear from the depths of hell never ever will dream have a dry inkwell!!!! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
don't you dare stop writing...not because of some self-appointed critic ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... [This message has been edited by elvira (edited 07-20-99).] |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I once again agree with elvira. You are much to talented to stop...use those words, for you are blessed with the gift. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! But yeah, you better not stop writing... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
To quit in the face of adversity...... tis the shame of cowards and wannabe's... While I can make no claim to your talent, I can call attention to your potential. Do the world, and yourself a favor and quit the whinning and beging the creating.... add beauty to this world in the form of verse, both dark and lovely. Either that, or quit, without the sorry swan song. |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
You think so do you? Not a chance my friend...this Dragon's claws will not let you escape. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sorry to say this, but some seem to have a problem distinguishing between fantasy and reality. Perhaps, they should try expressing themselves, venting to be rid of an unwanted emotion. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You have a wonderful talent with the written word, and the creative ways to use them. Like I said in a previous response I don't really like dark writing, but let me tell you this, you have a way of writing it with the right touch and that is a gift. Please keep your pen filled with ink, and our eyes inspired with your skill. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
We all know he cannot stop writing.....for if he is like us..........writing is like breathing, we cannot stop it and expect to live for very long. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Exactly right, Saxoness. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
If he ever stops writing, somebody go check on him. He would have to be sick. Keep it commin' |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Of course, dear Lady. |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
jaded, boring, trite? Adjectives one could never associate with your work! Great poem. |
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