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Open Poetry #1

I had a feeling

swan
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since 1999-07-19

Posts 58
california, usa

0 posted 1999-07-19 07:00 PM

Without a sound i knew just what you wanted, and withen myself i knew that it was wrong.
Behind the expression on your face i saw your true feelings, on that hot fourth of July night.
I had a feeling that nothing would ever hurt me more than what you were about to say.I looked at you one last time as you quietly begged me to stay.
I said,"we can't go back again to what we knew before". you said," i had a feeling i was out of luck", and then i closed the door.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 1999-07-19 08:00 PM

you say so much with so little, a true victory for a poet. Bravo

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-08-09 02:02 AM

wonderful.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 1999-08-09 12:40 PM

Nicely written.

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