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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
The moment that I knew is the moment when I looked onto one’s eyes and the celestial stars shined out from them dripping from the moon inside. It all seemed like a blur except the constellation I saw inside of his heart. Everything else surrounded me as just night, Plain and black, but when he spoke into my heart the stars began to shine through me. Light began to fill the darkness that hid me, the darkness the others left behind. The was a lift in spirits. Everything started to form into place as the empty hollowness inside me was filled. Every moment spent was another star that shined even brighter than the brightest. The person, the one who saw the light in me, he was what made my night not just a pit of nothing, but like diamonds scattered around to all fit perfectly into the darkness. Everything is how it should be now, and the dark clouds can not cover my night, for in that night is the one, the one that shimmers. By Rita Bowles |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
thanks!!! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
ooh, this is very beautiful!! Such description! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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