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The Way It's Taken

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-07-18 04:21 PM

I Love You,
what are other words compared?
This 3 word phrase is so strong.
Many a way it be taken,
Many people are mistaken.

So be careful when using,
it my be interpreted wrong.
Many will fall,
before relizing its call.

[This message has been edited by Sundance (edited 07-18-99).]

[This message has been edited by Sundance (edited 07-18-99).]

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

1 posted 1999-07-18 04:41 PM

I LOVE READING EVERYONES POETRY!!! U GUYS ROCK!!!

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 1999-07-18 08:03 PM

very simple......but it's perfect that way. I like it! Thanks for your thoughts

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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