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HM3
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 169
TX

0 posted 1999-07-18 11:20 AM


Marilyn and me, we'd been so long together
We faced the stormy weather
And that's why I believed
In Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, we'd been so many places
And now it seems like ages
That she and I were free
To be Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, we really used to be
Closer than a hug, our souls exchanged the love
That was meant to be
For Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, we drifted thru the ages
And as we turn the pages
It's painful to see
There's no more Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, tears fall down like rain
My heart won't beat the same
I keep callin' out your name
Marilyn it's me!

Marilyn and me, I always thought we'd be
But there's nothing left to say
We'll go our separate way
Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, it's brought me to my knees
God help me please
Teach me how to breathe
without Marilyn and me

Marilyn and me, as I turn to leave
Looking back I see
The way it used to be
Marilyn and me

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Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...

© Copyright 1999 Mark Ozee - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-07-18 02:31 PM


Very nice, I enjoyed the read, hope your pain goes away soon.
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-18 06:05 PM


nice piece, thanks for sharing

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
3 posted 1999-07-18 07:55 PM


I liked it. pain is such an easy thing to feel, but hard to express it. Nice job.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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