Open Poetry #1 |
I am who I am |
Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
I look in the mirror, and look even deeper.. I see a compassionate heart, one thats a keeper I'd give my shirt off my back, if I thought there was a need.. I'd do anything for a laugh.. for cheering up is my deed.. God made me so pretty, and yet the world has done its thing and tore apart, what I had, for a spell.. a sad song I did sing but with a Gentle Soul, I went on... and looked up toward the light, and with a smile, I looked at my friends.. and didnt have a fright lookin on the inside.. I see a beauty's Lair but sometimes on the outside.. I have a misplaced hair... I love myself for who I am... and what I can be.. and if you cant take it how I am.. you are you... and I am me so let me be, how I am.. and please, dont scrutinize.. for you dont know, the depression and anger that lies, beneath my eyes. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Point, set, match! Great job. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
YES!!!! You've found the angel inside!!!! |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
*blush* I am no angel.. but I thank you guys ONCE again.. for supporting my work ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A great piece of work here! If our words are a relection of our inner self (our soul) your's is indeed beautiful. Long may it outshine the darkness that haunts the corners of your mind. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
That's "reflection." Sorry about the typo - my mirror is a little distorted. Last time I ever buy one from the circus. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
thank you.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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