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Open Poetry #1

My Favorite Flower

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-07-17 03:35 AM

deep purple is the color, and soft it is so nice
sweet smelling like spring time , to me it doth suffice
my favorite flower, I can not pick, to ruin its delight.
to pick a flower is to pick a soul, straight from out of night
so I will pick a field, running wild, growing at thier own will
just to watch them wave in the air, the beauty doth instill...
in my heart, in my soul, I shall not pick a one..
I cant favor one or another, all have beauty some.

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-17 03:36 AM

All this from a simple poetic exercise I gave you. I am in awe of your talent.

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Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

2 posted 1999-07-17 03:36 AM

You truly have the beauty,wonderful as always...

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-07-17 03:38 AM

thank you guys.. you are truly great

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Gënt£ë¤§°û£

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-09 02:08 AM

Oh, so very beautiful...excellent job.

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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

5 posted 1999-08-09 10:52 AM

Thank you!

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Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

6 posted 1999-08-09 10:58 AM

That wuz really good! I feel the same way about flowers, and I never pick a one, so don't ruin their beauty!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-08-09 05:21 PM

Hey there! Well done! Better to watch them wave in the breeze and smell their sweetness, than to pluck them and enjoy them only for a short time. Glad to see your back!

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