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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
I sing the body electric! I sing the body electric! I SING THE BODY ELECTRIC! Old Walt shoulda worn his rubber soled shoes... ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Drop the second line and repeat the first line in its place and I think you’ll find you have a winner on your hands Craig Ward 7a |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
is that how tap-dancing was invented?   ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Thanks for the comments....hardly a masterpiece, but then again, Poetic Wheelbarrow is not about pleasing the critics... PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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