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elvira
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

0 posted 1999-07-15 05:57 PM

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Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

1 posted 1999-07-15 06:00 PM

that wuz cool! I like to way u wrote it! It makes it fun to read and that wuz very good!
I sometimes write like that, but only on paper.

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

2 posted 1999-07-15 06:01 PM

this would be a great greeting card. Good work.

jfreak

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

3 posted 1999-07-15 06:13 PM

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Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-07-31 11:45 PM

Ah, being apart from the one you love..*sighs*. Been there. Wonderful piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

5 posted 1999-08-01 03:19 AM

Elvira,
been there, done that, it's hard!!!

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

6 posted 1999-08-01 07:42 AM

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Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

7 posted 1999-08-01 08:27 AM

Very nicely done, I love the way you shaped it, and it goes with the poem, for as the poem goes along it gets stronger, as the lines got longer.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

8 posted 1999-08-01 10:11 AM

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Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

9 posted 1999-08-01 10:27 AM

Your revival had revived me. Don't know how I missed, as much as I keep an eye out for your work, but I'm glad I caught it this time. I guess it was meant to be.......

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 1999-08-01 08:16 PM

Beautifully written

CastleHoward
Junior Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 20

11 posted 1999-08-02 02:32 AM

You portray longing for your distant love so deftly, elvira... so much so that your feeling is tangible... it surely touches my heart.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

12 posted 1999-08-02 08:10 AM

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