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Open Poetry #1

This Wonderous Place

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 1999-07-15 03:51 PM

I stroll along God's promenade
As walk along a country lane
In awe the beauty he hath made
Upon my face a morning rain.

'Side golden fields of farmer's grain
Wild flowers bloom in sweet bouquet
Cattle lowing, bovine refrain
Amid the grass in distant lea.

Down in the dell, white picket fence
Sits white cottage, of gentlefolk
Yet in my thoughts, I have a sense
Am not awake, have not yet woke.

Am I worthy of wond'rous grace
That can create such beauteous place.

[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 07-15-99).]

Gentle Soul
Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

1 posted 1999-07-16 03:07 AM

wow.. that has such a nice vision.. and great rythm and flow..
nice touch!

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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-08-13 02:28 AM

I found this beauty hiding under a rock! Lovely, Tim as always!

Sue
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

3 posted 1999-08-13 03:13 AM

I walked with you when I read this poem.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-05-09 07:42 AM

Good morning Sir! Time for a repost, I think.

Yes, I do think so!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2003-01-01 04:58 AM

good lines

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