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Tug-O'-War (saga continues)
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Tug-O'-War (saga continues) |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
With her knots untied, and her chair has been loosened, Gentle Soul gets up.. she notices and tunnel, with some stairs.. and the sign says "Exit" Gentle Soul walks to the door, as all of her foes turn into one.. Evil I'll call him, for that is what he is.. he grabs her arms, and screams and yells.. "you can not go! for I have you now! you shall not be released by me!" With tears in her eyes, Darkangel brings a friend, her name is Hope, and they take Gentle Soul's other hand... she looks to her left, and the dark being with his evil eye, claims her, and taunts her.. *your mine forever! never to leave... forever you shall be!* Gentle Soul then looks to the right, and sees her Angel and Hope. She then gains a shimmering strength, one not like her own. she begins to tug along with her companions, and pulls from Evil's Grips... they all three ran, with Hope leading, and Dark Angel behind her. Running up and up.. on the stairs, to see the "Tunnel of Light" smiling inside.. Gentle Soul did not realize, Depression and Lust still lurks around. she walks along her tunnel again, with more than just a friend.. but a coach, an uplifter, Hope, and guide.. DarkAngel again.. by her side... leading to the light. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Trying to humble me again? this is excellent work. You're right, your best!! ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
oh no!! yur best! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I am completely captivated as this saga unwinds. What a wonderful piece of storytelling...... |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
thank you.. and I hope this is ok.. being a story and not truly a poem.. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this saga is grand gentle soul will there be more |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
Truly your best to date..... |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Thank you all... I am only telling about my life.. and how I feel.. and I appreciate the uplifting you guys have provided for me  ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
Shades of Hannah Hurnard--Hinds Feet on High Places and Mountains of Spices. Have you read them? You would probably enjoy them if not. Smile... ------------------ lenny |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
never heard of them.. but I will be sure to check them out! thanks.. hehe.. what a coincidence tho.. my name is Hannah!! heheh ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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