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The Pit.. part II
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The Pit.. part II |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Trying not to look back.. she keeps her head high, forgetting to look where she is going, she slips off the side, out of darkangel's control, he cant seem to catch her she returns to the darkside, crying and entrapped by Jealousy, Depression, and Lust... Gentle Soul feels useless, and stuck.. crying out loud, she's knows not what to do for, in her tied chair, she falls down the pit in dispair, feeling as if Love, and Joy, and Content are gone forever, she lands in the pit, cold and ashamed. as she sits there crying.. Fear appears at her side.. taunting and teasing making such noises, she cries out in her moods.. calling for Joy.. as along with Fear, Guilt, and Doubt came with him. She cries out in pain screaming for help... as she sees a small light it resembles dark angel, at a far.. She yells and screams, "DarkAngel! there you are!" he suddenly appears, and stands by GentleSoul's side as she cries and struggles, asking darkangel to untie her.. Trying to do it.. Darkangel cant do it.. for Gentlesoul made her mess.. she must go thru it herself, with Darkangel by her side, coaching her on.. she takes a deep breath, tears in her eyes, she looks at her foes, then by her side, she sees the sincerity in her angel's eyes, she smiles partially and concentrates on the knots. not knowing where to start.. she cries and almost stops.. not knowing what to do.. she looks again at her light, and starts to unravel knots. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Sweet mother of God, you did excellent work! I mean that, absolutely. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Phenomenal.....what else can I say? Another great piece, Gentle Soul. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
It's with tears in my eyes that I write this.You have done beautifully.May I also be at your side? |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
well.. Thank you for the replies... and Dragon.. Im sorry.. Darkangel knows every knook and cranny of me.. and at this point I dont think I could tell anyone else some of things my angel knows... But Thank you for sharing... ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sweet Gentle soul.....again you have transported my mind to rhat special realm. I have hopes the saga will continue...... |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
yes.. it will continue... as long as Im feelin like this.. I will continue to write about the pit.. ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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