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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-07-14 09:46 PM

Though I love a few others, and others love me, each holding a piece of my heart, don't you see, I loved you from the start. You complete me, no need to compete.

I've wandered in Darkness a lonely embittered soul, lost in the delight of being free. I never knew you were there, the half that makes me whole. You complete me.

I hear your voice amongst the Heavenly throng, a triumphant song, meant to inspire and delight. I nearly returned to the night where I thought you would never see that
You complete me.

From the pedestal you stand upon, you saw my plight. Then reaching into the Pit, you drew me from it to place me at your side. I can no longer hide the giddiness inside.
You complete me.

While I was crying for the death of the child lost inside my mind, with random rhyme keeping time, I despaired of anyone loving me. I still don't trust the kind of Light that you give so freely.
You complete me.

You are the one for whom I've paid all my dues. Every niggling bit of pain, each person that spit, every giggling girl laughing at my fall into the Pit, was just my due for until I met you, I embraced misery.
You certainly do
Complete me.

©1999 DreamEvil

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvil©

leelew
Member

since 1999-07-10

Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa

1 posted 1999-07-14 10:21 PM

So beautiful.Inside your dark soul live the light and occasionally you let it shine through.

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

2 posted 1999-07-14 10:55 PM

This is a really beautiful poem. I like it a lot. I think it shows you are softening up a little bit more and more

Its still a little sad though... but very nice

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~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-07-14 11:16 PM

Shucks folks, thank you both. The encouragement I get here helps alot.

Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12

Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

4 posted 1999-07-14 11:21 PM

I love it Dream... you are such a passionate person.. an inspiration to me..
Truly you have HELPED me turn my life around.. better? hehe

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Wilsonlee
New Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 5
Bukit Batok,Singapore

5 posted 1999-07-14 11:33 PM

I am but a new poet registered in netpoet
Tis is the first poem i've read and i find it beautiful. Touching... someone every lovelorn person can relate to.
I know i have a lot more to learn from everyone of you.

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Willy the lovelorn poet

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

6 posted 1999-07-15 12:43 PM

As I sit here wiping the tears from my eyes, I find it hard to type, I can hardly see. Is it really possible that someone out there loves me just this way? Leelew said it, love, sometimes you let that Light shine through. And when you do, you embrace the hearts of heaven.

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

7 posted 1999-07-15 12:49 PM

Just for you, one voice, just for you.

dimples22
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since 1999-07-15

Posts 30

8 posted 1999-07-15 03:00 PM

I think you should continue to write, I like your poem and found it moving and expressive.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

9 posted 1999-07-15 04:55 PM

Thank you, do you live up to your name?

Ominous
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

10 posted 1999-07-16 01:52 AM

Something felt by all at one time.
Very touching Dream.

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

11 posted 1999-07-16 02:45 AM

ac
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since 1999-06-17

Posts 129
Cayey, PR - USA

12 posted 1999-07-16 09:25 AM

-sigh-...reminds me of that one who is longer here but i know is watching from heaven still a part of me...

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

13 posted 1999-07-16 10:04 AM

Thank you.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

14 posted 1999-07-16 01:12 PM

I just have to read this every time I come here... I love this poem so much!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

15 posted 1999-07-16 02:10 PM

Perhaps the best compliment any of us could receive, coming from you, I know it is the best I CAN receive. There's no opinion I value more.

Sweet T
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since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

16 posted 1999-07-16 02:27 PM

This was a very moving poem.
It is really nice to know that someone will be there through it all and still have much love for you. I seriously hope that I too find this person someday. Until then....................

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

17 posted 1999-07-16 11:33 PM

Thank you, I appreciate the sentiment.

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