»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #1
»
The Nighttime of My Soul
| Open Poetry #1 |
|
The Nighttime of My Soul |
|
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It was the nighttime of my soul, scattered among the memories of broken dreams and promises, where no one ever sees, the painful longing in my eyes as I stand alone and search the ever changing skies looking for the one who can, gather together this drifting man. And if I find it not, I will pull from within my soul, the pieces of the puzzle that again will make me whole. And though my life is darkened still, it is only twilight.. my eyes adjust to the loss of you, as my soul begins it’s fight, to step into the future where, the world I again can face… But beside me there will always be, a small and lonely space. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good compromise of rhyme and free style. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
||
|
blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
My throat is choked up for your words have made me cry. blueloon |
||
|
~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh WOW! I love the line: my eyes adjust to the loss of you... Beautiful poem! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
||
|
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A deep sense of sorrow prevails. I bow to you poet most devine. |
||
|
ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Why does all this sound familiar?...i loved the sound of the strength and being brave... while at the same time admitting to the pain of empty space... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||