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Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
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0 posted 1999-07-13 04:54 PM


I remember when,
We walked hand in hand,
As friends.
We had hoped that our friendship,
Would never end.
Through the worst of times,
We were the best of friends.
We had said that nothing would come between us,
especially not men.
And then one day things started to change,
We started fighting over him.
I feel that I have lost you,
And our friendship has come to an end.
I wish I could tell you how I feel,
And that my life has only just started to begin.

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

© Copyright 1999 Princess Lily - All Rights Reserved
Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
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1 posted 1999-07-26 12:17 PM


If you are reading this please reply


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe




[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).]

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-07-26 12:40 PM


I have read, and I am replying!! Wonderful job!! I am so very thankful this did not happen with me and my best friend. Exellently written, Princess Lily.

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
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3 posted 1999-07-26 01:02 AM


Alwye,
Thank you very much for the reply.The worst thing about this is that it really did happen between me and well my ex-best friend.The sad thing she is my cousin.
Thanx again


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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



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