Open Poetry #1 |
For You |
tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
To you my love, this rose I give For your love, it is I live You fill ever corner of my heart Left is not one lonely part In search of love I go no more It is you my love that I adore Your beauty is a work of art Your inner self beyond compare Yes its you my love that takes me where No words nor wine or music sweet Has ever made me feel complete As you have done, my lovely sweet If only I could tell you so Then forward, our lives could go A rush of feelings over come, breathless, shaking, feeling numb Then life on earth would be as such That Heavens Kingdom I could touch To you my love this rose I give, in hopes of one day we may live In ageless, endless, passing time, together with our hearts entwined But for now I'll go on passing by, talking, smiling, being shy If you look up and see me here I hope you know, it is I my dear That loves you more then words can say If you hear my heart beat racing wild, just touch my hand or give a smile One day I know our love will be, a love for all eternity For now I give you this sweet rose And dream of the day to come You and I my love, shall be one. @~}~~ tori 87 --------------------------------------------- If with pen in hand I have made you think Then I've wasted not, one drop of ink [This message has been edited by tori (edited 07-12-99).] |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Tori, this is a wonderful piece of work. I love it! It fills one with a warm, loving feeling! Thanks for posting and sharing! ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks for the kind words...... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wonderful verse, I'm not one for the romantics, well, lately I am. Very good work! ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you DreamE. I too like the darker side.. |
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