Never been Kissed (has nothing to do with the movie -- please tell me what you think!

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Never been Kissed (has nothing to do with the movie -- please tell me what you think!

Delilah
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 36
The Wonderful America

0 posted 1999-07-10 01:14 AM

Will I never feel his kiss?
His beautiful lips against my own?
Will I never feel the warmth and the passion
turn to bliss?
Will I never feel his sweater
rubbing up under my cheek?
His dark, luscious lashes never shall I meet.
Will I never feel our throbbing hearts melted
into one?
They call it lust, I call it yearn.
Oh how I long to be kissed.

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-10 02:37 AM

Your poem doesn't fit the normal mold when it comes to rhyme scheme. The way you wrote the rhyme into this poem, makes it flow beautifully. I know you probably didn't intend for this to reflect off of the movie but it does so.....beautifully. You have done a wonderful job here. Keep up the great work.

JFreak

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