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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Things are changing all around, people, places, me. No one really notices, no one wants to see. I don't understand it, no one really does. Except I try my best to, so I can change what was. I've made a mistake, and now I must pay. I have to live with my choice, and let the past lay. People come and people go, and somethings remain the same. I've made mistakes and some wrong turns, but I've made it a long way. I've been hurt and my trust betrayed, used, abused, and pained. My hearts been broke many a titme, but it's a time I can't erase. ------------------ I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Poignant and true, this moved me. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
however painful it may seem, the meaning of life still remains to search for its meaning.....we all travel down the road you have so poetically described ------------------ i never call a poem "nice" or such, for that would not be saying much |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
Thank you both so much. Elvira, you are very deeply insighted, thank you so much for your thoughts. =) |
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Ominous Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 68Canada |
I just want to thank you again. You have made me feel welcome, and helped boost my confidence. For this I will be eternally grateful. ------------------ I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
great poem, it's sad, but it's true. is life trying to teach us a lesson? |
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