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Falling in love - leave feedback

Enrique
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 52
San Juan, PR

0 posted 1999-07-05 10:12 PM

The nights seem colder,
The days seem slower,
The sun seems brighter,
I'm falling in love.

I need you here,
I need your touch,
I need you beside me,
I'm falling in love.

You are scared,
You are confused,
You're afraid to fall,
But you're falling in love.

You can't run,
You can't hide,
You can't escape it,
You're falling in love.

We want to be together,
We want each other,
We want to be cared for,
We're falling in love.

We're learning to love,
We're learning to share,
We're learning to care,
We're falling in love.

That's all I can say,
That's all I can write,
That's all I can think about,
I'm falling in love.

It's all gonna work out,
It'll all be fine,
It's gonna take time,
I'm falling in love,
And I'm falling in love with you.

- Enrique

Lil Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 21

1 posted 1999-07-05 11:40 PM

I like your poetry...I hope to see more of your work...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-06 08:44 AM

I'm not sure exactly why, call me a fool for those love poems, but I really liked this one.

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