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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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See Not I can see you now The blinders have been removed. So I close my eyes. 16 September, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-16-99).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A breakup, maybe? Nice haiku, Sunshine, you did well. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, E'beth! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
poignant...Sunshine, I love it...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
few words, big impact.....well done!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Pithy...Liked it PAL ------------------ |
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