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Stefanie71
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since 1999-09-16
Posts 13


0 posted 1999-09-16 01:15 PM


Fatuously Me
Your specious nature so alluring,
makes quotidian life alive.
Perforce my emotions, uncovering the veil,
evanescent joy, will I survive?
Love is not facile, yet you shine munificently;
but how indolent will this be?
On your path, intransigent at times,
i see the paucity of me.

revision :

Your deceptively pleasing nature,so alluring,
makes ordinary life alive.
Hold back my emotions, uncovering the veil,
fleeting joy, will i survive?
Love is not easy, yet you shine generously;
but how painless will this be?
On your path, uncompromising at times,
I see the scarcity of me.


[This message has been edited by Stefanie71 (edited 09-16-99).]

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LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
1 posted 1999-09-16 01:26 PM


Alright, ya lil Dictionary tease - are ya happy? You made me open that well-worn tome several times and actually read what you wrote. This was a dirty female trick to make me slow down and think, and I hate to do that! lol

Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 1999-09-16 04:17 PM


Lessee....going through my Webster's.....okay....got that one....and now.....yep...got that one.....let's see here..yep....that's a great poem......and all this time I thought it was about "Flatuence" and LongJohn had posted under another name again?.....Good work though....
Stefanie71
Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 13

3 posted 1999-09-16 04:24 PM


ok .. ok... i know i know... no more websters .
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
4 posted 1999-09-16 04:26 PM


Stephanie....is was really good sweets....but I'm just a damn Toerag?...I ain't even learnt poe-tree yet?.....LOL...
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