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Stefanie71 Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 13 |
Fatuously Me Your specious nature so alluring, makes quotidian life alive. Perforce my emotions, uncovering the veil, evanescent joy, will I survive? Love is not facile, yet you shine munificently; but how indolent will this be? On your path, intransigent at times, i see the paucity of me. revision : Your deceptively pleasing nature,so alluring, makes ordinary life alive. Hold back my emotions, uncovering the veil, fleeting joy, will i survive? Love is not easy, yet you shine generously; but how painless will this be? On your path, uncompromising at times, I see the scarcity of me. [This message has been edited by Stefanie71 (edited 09-16-99).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Alright, ya lil Dictionary tease - are ya happy? You made me open that well-worn tome several times and actually read what you wrote. This was a dirty female trick to make me slow down and think, and I hate to do that! lol |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lessee....going through my Webster's.....okay....got that one....and now.....yep...got that one.....let's see here..yep....that's a great poem......and all this time I thought it was about "Flatuence" and LongJohn had posted under another name again?.....Good work though.... |
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Stefanie71 Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 13 |
ok .. ok... i know i know... no more websters .  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Stephanie....is was really good sweets....but I'm just a damn Toerag?...I ain't even learnt poe-tree yet?.....LOL... |
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