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Open Poetry #2

Loves Mystery

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-09-02 11:10 PM

Love is a wonderful mystery
That only you can define for me
Going unknown until I met thee
It was something that I could not see
I can think of no one else but you
Upon my soul, my love for you grew
And now there is nothing I can do
But declare one truth, my love for you
It will last until the end of time
As long as the poets words shall rhyme
Throughout this life's endless toil and grime
I will love until then ends of time
Love is a wonderful mystery
That only you can define for me

Critic
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 9

1 posted 1999-09-02 11:23 PM

you are forceing this, while I think you have much more to say that things that end in -oo, -ee.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-09-05 03:38 PM

This is really quite nice, Der Keit.... I hope you continue posting with us...

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