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Homage to a leaf
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Homage to a leaf |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Homage to a Leaf A leaf fell upon my car. I drove it days near and far. It turned from green to yellow. Then brown to crusty mellow. In truth, it kept me, company. I welcomed its tenacity. For each day it stuck hard and fast. Until it fell one day at last It left me, on a sunny day. And I miss its tenacious stay. I grieve its consequential end, To me I homage it a friend. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful homage. You took something very simple and brought life into it, gave it a personality. I absolutely love the feelings inspired by the lines: "I welcomed its tenacity. For each day it stuck hard and fast." Beautifully written!! ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Your comment is a beaut, It is a real toot. Thank you so much for the wonderful words. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You certainly have a way with words! And themes! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dsnyder, Yes reems and reems of themes. thank you so much for the comments |
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