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Dreams |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
The message has always been “chase your dreams” Be it love, travel or occupation Sometimes it’s not as easy as it seems Reachable only through perspiration Dreams are as elusive as the fairies They need to be coerced by loving words Be careful and quick for the wind caries Dreams away like the strains of music chords But be ye not also hasty for fear Of dreams vanishing because grasped too soon Leaving you not but blood sweat and a tear You will soon learn that patience is a boon The message will always be “chase your dreams” It will not be as easy as it seems |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I liked this poem.. you had some great lines in here.  good job! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful...and so true. Exellent, Exellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Ruby dagger Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 76Wyoming, MN, U.S.A |
I love this poem! dreams come true with lots of work. if they were easy to get they wouldn't be dreams. ------------------ Luv ya Kelly I'm no different than the average girl, my dreams wrap around the world. -Rebecca Lynn Howard |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
You did a great job on your verse. Persistence and persperation will always catch dreams. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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