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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183
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I was just going through old work an happened upon this peice. It was the first poem I ever truly wrote. For two weeks now I have loved And yet I’ve loved much longer. Every moment I think of her, My love for her grows stronger. But what is love or what I feel? Is it a self created notion? By pondering now I think not. My love’s as strong as the oceans. Nay, the oceans are’nt as strong as proclaimed. They will not last forever. Even after the fall of the world, My love can not be severed. And upon my love reading this rhyme May she know she’s loved throughout all time. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Such sweet, wonderful sentiments! Did she love it?  ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lucky lady, Beowulf.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very touching ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Thank you all for responding as your thoughts mean much. Yes she did like the poem, very much so in fact. However, since then she took a liking to my good freind and him likewise. I am now with the person that all my other poetry is about. 'Twas for the best. Thank you again all. ------------------ Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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