Open Poetry #2 |
Online Romance |
DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
More often I've been dwelling on true love. Loveplay has become an intricate dance. Needing and wanting is all I'm sure of. Any relationship's keystone is trust. The start of trust is communication. Cyber-sex does little to relieve lust. Such is the gist of my rumination. Problematic love is not mine alone. Conversation online builds awareness. Miscommunication I can't condone. Cogitation reveals the unfairness. My hope is that few can commiserate. Legion numbers the multitudes that do. Lovers' betrayal will eviscerate. Jealousy's doubt interfered hitherto. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
A fascinating read. Communication is the key to all doors... ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well said.Trust is hard to find on the net,but even harder in life. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
(hey,, I don't have a dictionary..).. (smile) lots of big words.. im' confused.. but i liked it.. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well done Dream! Trust is the corner stone. You can't hardly tell online! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Can I say ... I know where you are coming from, for I am A cyber slave.. good words Dreamevil. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Trust is definitely most important whether you are online or not, I believe. Great poem, Dream, as usual! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I have learned the hard way that trust is sooo very important no matter what!!! Sometimes more so than love itself!! Nice as always!!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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