Sorry about the last post try this one

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Open Poetry #2

Sorry about the last post try this one

Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 1999-09-15 09:40 PM

Fair Is My Love
Sweet rose fair flower I weep for thee.
For a flower that dies when first it
Gins to bud is a sad and solemn thing.
All thy love thou didest give to one
That let it die within an hour. Know
Not he how delicate the flower.
Between each, kiss her true love
Swearing. still, hear them not did he.
She burned with love as straw with
Fire flameth. Yet, cherish it not would he
His vow was breath and breath a vapor is
Now lost his greatest passion is...

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Loneheart

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-15 09:44 PM

Oh, OK, now I understand it! Very wonderful is this one! I enjoyed!

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Denise

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-09-15 10:11 PM

I like it !!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-15 10:14 PM

Wow...intense

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-09-16 01:16 AM

It is intense and I like it too!
There is no grayer hour than that just before the dawn..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

5 posted 1999-09-16 12:50 PM

Thank you one and all who knows if I hang around all the truly great poets upon this
forum maybe I will learn to write as well

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 1999-09-16 01:28 PM

Loneheart,
You write well enough, good job.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

7 posted 1999-09-16 01:35 PM

yes,....beautifully written....I enjoyed the read......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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