Open Poetry #2 |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Up above our sun Down below the dirt Inside the fishes mouth Upside down Where is it?? Behind the star Under the feet of that old man Within a heart of the television set It is not there I do not know it Blustering by as it rakes past the trees I sense something unreal to me Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it In the traces of of our mere words I see it ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-15-99).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Wow!...This is deep! HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Blush!!! Thank You Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Once again you've opened the channels for mass interpretation! Well done. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That is what I intended to do!!! Very cool!! Thanks a lot!! Smile Justbleu |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Justbleu, Nice and elusive. I enjoyed this a lot. thank you. Tyson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Talk about teasing but beautifully done I must add...: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks everyone |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
37? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You lost me there Christopher!!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a mood poem....nice |
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