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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-15 06:26 PM


Up above our sun
Down below the dirt
Inside the fishes mouth
Upside down
Where is it??
Behind the star
Under the feet of that old man
Within a heart of the television set
It is not there
I do not know it
Blustering by as it rakes past the trees
I sense something unreal to me
Through the screech of the fire engine I hear it
Deep within the flavor of the frozen cone I feel it
In the traces of of our mere words I see it
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Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-15-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 1999-09-15 07:33 PM


Wow!...This is deep!

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-15 07:38 PM


Blush!!! Thank You

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


Severn
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3 posted 1999-09-15 07:58 PM


Once again you've opened the channels for mass interpretation! Well done.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-16 12:27 PM


That is what I intended to do!!! Very cool!!

Thanks a lot!! Smile

Justbleu

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
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san diego, ca.
5 posted 1999-09-16 07:48 PM


Justbleu,
Nice and elusive. I enjoyed this a lot. thank you.
Tyson

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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6 posted 1999-09-16 09:20 PM


Talk about teasing but beautifully done I must add...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 1999-09-17 04:19 AM


Thanks everyone
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
8 posted 1999-09-17 04:23 AM


37?


Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 1999-09-17 04:26 AM


You lost me there Christopher!!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-04-23 01:26 PM


a mood poem....nice
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