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Come Softly To Me
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Come Softly To Me |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
~Come Softly To Me~ My mind says unto my heart thou art foolish oh heart, For thy longings are of such a greatness That no maiden can fulfill them. Nay not so speaketh my soul with great forcefulness! Tell not the lies of others to thine own heart. Mind for I have felt such love that thy heart dreameth of. Possible for a maiden to bestow such love upon thee if she be Pure of heart for when a maiden shall truly love us then But a touch of our hand shall set her soul afire unto the very Core when she looketh into our eyes. If she looketh with The same desire, need and longings then she shall see a passion So great it will engulf all of her being With the completeness she has so longed for....... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*gulp* I'm melting, thats it, I've gotta email you.... ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this poem very much. I looked at your web site and am impressed with your style. Love the graphics, especially the lake class applets!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditt! Lovely, indeed! ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
LoneHeart, Sir Knight are you possibly recincarnated? : ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Loneheart, I'm melting too, I love it  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sir Knight has not return emailed the Fragile Rose...why? ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Kind Sir The fragile Rose awaits.. Beautifully, magically written: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Are you for real and are there anymore like you back home? This style/poetic voice of yours is awesome. I am surprised every woman here isn't fainting at your feet, begging you to be her particular champion! Good stuff Loneheart...surely you will have to change your name soon! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah, Jeeze Louise, I'm melting as we speak...... Absolutely beautiful.------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good verse |
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