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Loneheart
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since 1999-09-13
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Eastern US

0 posted 1999-09-13 07:35 PM


~Come Softly To Me~
My mind says unto my heart thou art foolish oh heart,
For thy longings are of such a greatness
That no maiden can fulfill them.
Nay not so speaketh my soul with great forcefulness!
Tell not the lies of others to thine own heart.
Mind for I have felt such love that thy heart dreameth of.
Possible for a maiden to bestow such love upon thee if she be
Pure of heart for when a maiden shall truly love us then
But a touch of our hand shall set her soul afire unto the very
Core when she looketh into our eyes. If she looketh with
The same desire, need and longings then she shall see a passion
So great it will engulf all of her being
With the completeness she has so longed for.......


© Copyright 1999 Loneheart - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-09-13 07:51 PM


*gulp* I'm melting, thats it, I've gotta email you....

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-09-13 08:36 PM


Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this poem very much. I looked at your web site and am impressed with your style. Love the graphics, especially the lake class applets!

Denise
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3 posted 1999-09-13 08:38 PM


Ditt! Lovely, indeed!

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Denise

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-09-16 11:51 PM


LoneHeart, Sir Knight are you possibly recincarnated? :

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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5 posted 1999-09-16 11:55 PM


Wow Loneheart, I'm melting too, I love it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-09-16 11:57 PM


Sir Knight has not return emailed the Fragile Rose...why?

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-09-17 01:07 AM


Kind Sir The fragile Rose awaits..
Beautifully, magically written:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
8 posted 1999-09-17 02:28 AM


Are you for real and are there anymore like you back home? This style/poetic voice of yours is awesome. I am surprised every woman here isn't fainting at your feet, begging you to be her particular champion! Good stuff Loneheart...surely you will have to change your name soon!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
9 posted 1999-09-17 02:31 AM


Ah, Jeeze Louise, I'm melting as we speak...... Absolutely beautiful.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-04-23 01:28 PM


good verse
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