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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
If im gone tomorrow these words are all that will remain of I and if im swallowed by my self absorbed sea dont think just read this is my testimony my diary of sights which never you see its always just another part of this mystery called me unravel it may go blind what surprise you will find im quite simple just sudden fog in your eyes ------------------ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How true, Jackal! All our words are a part of us, and very easily can surprise others while reading. Well written. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very moving, Jackal, with such an air of sadness. I like. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done! ------------------ Denise |
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